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Anyone who says that I am lucky to be me,
Must be deceived by what they see:
I'm not the person I used to be,
It's now a lie you see.

I wanted to be confident, happy and fun,
But I ended up instead, negative, unhappy and glum.
Either concealing, or revealing myself too much:
Now you see, I'm not as lucky as such.

The mask I wear starts to crack,
Now everyone sees what I lack.
What can I do to get on track?
But do I really want my life back?

Anyone who said that I was lucky to be me,
Now know that they were deceived.
It was a lie they'd seen,
And I was not as I seemed.
©2004-2009 ~Icyblues
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Continuation/rework of the poem- am suffering frm w/block :(

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:iconwesley-v-hek:
wow its so nice, you placed the words very well :)
:iconz4k:
Wow, I love the mood of this poem! Another masterpeice from Icy! :+fav:

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:iconcraigism:
Good work. I can relate.

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:iconswaroop:
very nice :)

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yay for paroxysmal lucid superconsciousness!

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:iconooorooo:
that is so good!!!

:highfive:

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:iconicyblues:
thnx xx :)

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x You can close your eyes to the things you don't want to see, but you can't close your heart to the things you don't want to feel. x

...x Shattered Glass, Shattered Dreams, Shattered Heart, Shattered Soul x...
:iconinnocentintentions:
writers block my arse, brilliant work =0)
:iconicyblues:
aww thnx :hug: xx

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x You can close your eyes to the things you don't want to see, but you can't close your heart to the things you don't want to feel. x

...x Shattered Glass, Shattered Dreams, Shattered Heart, Shattered Soul x...
:iconicyblues:
ta :) :hug:

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x You can close your eyes to the things you don't want to see, but you can't close your heart to the things you don't want to feel. x

...x Shattered Glass, Shattered Dreams, Shattered Heart, Shattered Soul x...

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