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The Rebelle in me by ~Icyblues:iconIcyblues:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Fixed




Should I be good, or should I be bad?
Should I be happy, or should I be sad?

Should I break your heart, or mend it?
Should I delete that hateful e-mail or send it?

Should I be from Heaven, or should I be from Hell?
Can you be the one to tell?

I can be an angel, but also be a devil.
I guess its just the choice between the saint and the rebel.

The constant fight within me, who should win?
If I was a devil, I would be full of sin.
But if I was an angel, would it just be serenity I'd bring?

Rebel against religion,
Against that final decision.
Or follow someone for the rest of your life,
Never knowing that you'd wasted your time.

This decision I have to take,
Will I follow the crowd, or will the plunge I make?
©2004-2009 ~Icyblues
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Author's Comments

This is very random and I don't even know what Im going to write about- its the spur of the moment thing!

Crapiness personified I know, but ah well.

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~craigism Jul 19, 2004, 10:09:22 AM
Very nice. It's the part of our life that some people don't reach until 50.

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Everyone likes a clown, but nobody loves him.
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~Icyblues Jul 19, 2004, 11:12:30 AM
aww. Thanx :hug:. Yeah i kno. But ive reached this part in mi teen years- I must b special!

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x You can close your eyes to the things you don't want to see, but you can't close your heart to the things you don't want to feel. x

...x Shattered Glass, Shattered Dreams, Shattered Heart, Shattered Soul x...
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*Scipio-the-elder Jul 19, 2004, 11:56:19 AM
Don't live too fast now ;) Trust me on that one :D Love how you put it all together.
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~Icyblues Jul 19, 2004, 1:32:58 PM
Tjanks v. much! Gd 2say I just thought of the title and went along with it!I'll try not to live too fast

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x You can close your eyes to the things you don't want to see, but you can't close your heart to the things you don't want to feel. x

...x Shattered Glass, Shattered Dreams, Shattered Heart, Shattered Soul x...
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*love0me0forever909 Jul 19, 2004, 2:11:14 PM
:clap: i sure loved this!

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M.E.E.
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~love2behated Jul 19, 2004, 3:17:15 PM
Nice, I added you as a friend but I'm still trying to figure out how to seee other peoples journals, but in my town it seems to be the trend to be the rebel, its sickening, Preppy people trying to be all.....as they call me *PUNK/GOTH/REBEL* *shrugs off, I'd rather be labeled thoes than a prep I tell YA! But all in all I like it :)
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~MaDHaTtEr0605 Jul 19, 2004, 8:47:00 PM
I really like this poem...it's unique...:heart:

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Try and listen to what the singer says and realize it's more important than the air in your chest...


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~Endelva Jul 20, 2004, 12:18:19 AM
Beautiful and strong poem dear! :rose:

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"Do you want to know the art of living, my friend? It is contained in one phrase: make use of suffering."
- Henri-Frédéric Amiel.
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~Icyblues Jul 20, 2004, 2:17:39 AM
Thank you!! :hug:

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x You can close your eyes to the things you don't want to see, but you can't close your heart to the things you don't want to feel. x

...x Shattered Glass, Shattered Dreams, Shattered Heart, Shattered Soul x...
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