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Stupid, painless escape? by ~Icyblues:iconIcyblues:





Will I have to keep you away from everything sharp?
Razor blades, scissors and even safety pins?
To stop you from slipping away in the dark,
Or trying 'cleanse' yourself from your ‘sins’.

Will I have to lock up the medicines and throw away the key,
And somehow hide every mirror?
It's because you hate the reflection you see,
It isn’t that bad if you only looked nearer.

Will I have to watch you every time you sleep?
To check that you still breathe?
While you’re in your slumber so deep.
It’s the only time when your emotions don’t seethe.

Please don’t slip away,
Just because you can.
Please don’t leave me a note to say:
‘I hope you understand’…
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A way to escape,
From the mixed up feelings inside.
A way to escape,
I no longer have to hide.

The mirror's cracked,
A distorted, hated reflection.
My self-esteem, once more is attacked,
Once again, I'm feeling dejected.

No more fears,
No more pain.
No more tears,
Falling like torrents of rain.

An endless sleep,
You just slip away.
No more will my blood seep,
No more hurting day by day.

I have no option but to escape,
From the life I live each day.
I need to escape,
From my world so grey.

It's just so tempting,
To slip away.
I hope you understand,
Is all I can say...
©2004-2009 ~Icyblues
:iconicyblues:

Author's Comments

Hmm, 2 different viewpoints on suicide (escape). It's different I know! Image by , and changed slightly by me!
Edit: I thought some of it didn't flow.

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:iconant1441:
Amazing graphic.


And the prose is excelent, as usual
:iconicyblues:
awww :hug: u r so kind, as usual!

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x You can close your eyes to the things you don't want to see, but you can't close your heart to the things you don't want to feel. x

...x Shattered Glass, Shattered Dreams, Shattered Heart, Shattered Soul x...
:iconmadhatter0605:
I like this a lot! It's deep...:)

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Try and listen to what the singer says and realize it's more important than the air in your chest...


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:iconwesley-v-hek:
both are very good :D

like them a lot

cheers:!:
:iconalkalinebabe:
hey...
that's pretty nifty...
you've got both POV's there, and the emotions/actions so well down pat...
If I didn't know better I'd say you were on both ends of this...
and the picture...
really nice...
tell *who'sever it is* that it's awesome...

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Hey You!
Yeah, YOU!!
:wave: ~*HI!!!*~ :wave:
:paranoid:
:sprint:
:iconiimonkeefunkii:
Thanks, for the poem. :hug:
:iconoris:
+fav

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:iconicyblues:
awww thnx :) :hug:

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x You can close your eyes to the things you don't want to see, but you can't close your heart to the things you don't want to feel. x

...x Shattered Glass, Shattered Dreams, Shattered Heart, Shattered Soul x...
:iconicyblues:
thnx

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x You can close your eyes to the things you don't want to see, but you can't close your heart to the things you don't want to feel. x

...x Shattered Glass, Shattered Dreams, Shattered Heart, Shattered Soul x...
:iconicyblues:
lol :hug: thnx 4 the really cool comment!!!

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x You can close your eyes to the things you don't want to see, but you can't close your heart to the things you don't want to feel. x

...x Shattered Glass, Shattered Dreams, Shattered Heart, Shattered Soul x...

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