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Starcrossed Lovers by ~Icyblues:iconIcyblues:

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Were we starcrossed lovers meant to be?
Or were we the partnership that fate didnt see?
Because I don't want our love to die,
Because our love, was love at first sight.

We couldn't ever help that,
But I think what they say is a fact:
Opposites attract.

Our love was a secret,
To our families- a threat:
To the ancient grudge, that had left many dead.

Without you, I would be lost,
My heart would've turned colder than the winter's frost.

But I love you, and our lives were the cost.
But I don't have any regrets:

We're just the modern day Romeo and Juliet.
But instead of Capulet and Montague,
There's me and you.
©2004-2009 ~Icyblues
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~Endelva Jul 22, 2004, 3:02:39 AM
If you replace this: "But I don't have any regrets:" and put this: "And I don't have any regrets..." I think it would be GREAT! :heart:

Not a scrap, a full piece of art.

--
"Do you want to know the art of living, my friend? It is contained in one phrase: make use of suffering."
- Henri-Frédéric Amiel.
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~Icyblues Jul 22, 2004, 3:04:41 AM
aww :hug: thank you!! I only wanted ure opinion, cos I ddnt want to disappoint u!

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x You can close your eyes to the things you don't want to see, but you can't close your heart to the things you don't want to feel. x

...x Shattered Glass, Shattered Dreams, Shattered Heart, Shattered Soul x...
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~Endelva Jul 22, 2004, 3:06:42 AM
You are sweet! :heart:

--
"Do you want to know the art of living, my friend? It is contained in one phrase: make use of suffering."
- Henri-Frédéric Amiel.
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~Icyblues Jul 22, 2004, 3:16:14 AM
lol. :hug: I try my best :)

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x You can close your eyes to the things you don't want to see, but you can't close your heart to the things you don't want to feel. x

...x Shattered Glass, Shattered Dreams, Shattered Heart, Shattered Soul x...
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~purplesunset Jul 22, 2004, 7:12:06 AM
this is really gd an should be in your gallery :) :hug:

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~Not every day can rock, but oh well, that's life~
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~Icyblues Jul 23, 2004, 2:26:33 AM
lol! Thanx! That avatar is soooo coool! :hug:

--
x You can close your eyes to the things you don't want to see, but you can't close your heart to the things you don't want to feel. x

...x Shattered Glass, Shattered Dreams, Shattered Heart, Shattered Soul x...
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~Wesley-v-Hek Mar 3, 2005, 11:06:55 AM
makes me think

"romeo and juliet"

hehe nice one
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~AlkalineBabe Mar 3, 2005, 11:18:41 AM
beautiful!
and I was just thinking about Romeo and Juliet... wanting to either read it or watch it or both *(again)*

and you know, YOU'RE the only poet who rhymes that I can read...
I don't like it anywhere else, but you're really works...

:hug:

--
mmm, fiber
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~ant1441 Mar 3, 2005, 11:31:58 AM
hehe

Were we starcrossed lovers, meant to be?

Such a juxtaposition (Sorry had to use that word)
Starcrossed Lovers, meant to be
thats funny
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