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Numb to love,
Numb to hate.
Numb to the world,
And any emotion it rates.

I’m numb to these words,
I’m numb to this rhyme.
Numb to anything,
Anything apart from time.

Time to know that love isn’t there,
And hate can’t fill the gap.
A self-made crevice,
A self-made trap.

I’m numb to this melody,
I’m numb to the song.
I’m numb to all but the thought:
Why has it taken me so long?

I’m numb to everything,
Yet I can still cry.
I know that this could change,
But I’m too scared to try.

Scared to try and be taken off the drip,
Of emotion-killing drugs that keep me sane.
Scared to let go of this protection,
The one that keeps me from pain.

I’m my own worst enemy,
I keep myself numb.
Hoping that one day I’ll be strong enough,
And to emotion, I’ll succumb.
©2007-2009 ~Icyblues
:iconicyblues:

Author's Comments

Feeling nothing can be your best friend, but your worst enemy.

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:iconblue-haze:
"Scared to try and be taken off the drip,
Of emotion-killing drugs that keep me sane."

That's what did it for me...
:iconblue-haze:
"Scared to try and be taken off the drip,
Of emotion-killing drugs that keep me sane."

That's what did it for me...
:iconemwyalyce:
whoa! :jawdrop: Thats amazing! :)


You have such a passion for your writing and you can see it within the words which you have writen!

Loving it! :blowkiss:
:glomp:

xx

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[ It's all make believe, isn't it? ]
:iconmidnight-aurora:
love it as usual. the only comment i would make is:
"Numb to anything,
Anything apart from time."

the repetition of anythin jarred with me a bit, perhaps "numb to anything / apart from the time". but im not sure. it is after all, your work, i never feel right making my own amendments. x

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--Black enchanting eyes cut through my heart--
:iconsingingspoon:
yet amazingly the thing that makes us more bumb than everything... are emotions.
fav it.

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Nunca conheci quem tivesse levado porrada.
Todos os meus conhecidos têm sido campeões em tudo.
~
Never met those who have been hit
All my acquaintances have been champs in everything

[ Fernando Pessoa ]
:iconicyblues:
Thank you very much x

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Love Will Tear Us Apart
:iconscipio-the-elder:
I always love your words. I can appreciate the courage it takes sometimes to open up a little and let someone peer through.

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:I am forever torn between what could be and what is:
:iconicyblues:
Thank you...
I can't believe this poem is so old.

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Love Will Tear Us Apart
:iconscipio-the-elder:
I can relate. It has been a long time since I have submitted anything.

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:I am forever torn between what could be and what is:

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