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October 2, 2004
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I've got to let go of this dream,
This dream of you and me:
And it's harder than it seems.

I have to let go,
Because there's too much hurt inside.
There's too much you don't know,
Especially these feelings for you I denied.

I have to let go,
Because I know I'll never tell you.
My self-esteems' too low,
For my feeling's to get through.

I have to let go because,
Because, I think I'll be rejected.
And I'll go back to the way I was-
Feeling dejected.

I need to let you go,
There's no more excuses.
I don't want to let you go,
But I'm always the loses.
:iconicyblues:
meh, i dunno- just how im feelin
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:iconiimonkeefunkii:
It's one sad realization, this poem. You did a good job. I pictured the person turning their back on what they've been watching for a long time without anyone noticing while the sun was setting. ...mmm...I'm tired and am thinking too much. Eheh. Good work on this one. =)
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:iconbubblynut:
woah, like it!
u know sumtimes it's good 2 face ur fears, otherwise u mi8 let all the things u want in life just slip by
i think u know wot i mean ;-)
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:iconicyblues:
lol- i faced a fear, u kno how THAT turned out now dnt u :P
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:iconhamish-ferret:
Having 'been there, done that,' I can understand where you're coming from - so true. I love it. Take heart in the fact that, although it seems impossible at the moment, things will get better, you will let go (or he will come to feel the same for you), and things will seem o so much brighter when it happens. Nuff of my preaching.
Take care,
Ferret
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:iconicyblues:
lol- preaching?? It was ace preaching!! thnx so much 4 the wonderful; comment :hug: u rock and ill keep u updated!!
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:icondemonic-honor:
nice very emotional :hug:
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:iconastronomia:
Good.. Know the feeling.. :hug:
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:iconicyblues:
awww :hug: you are soo cool!! I am honoured tht u have commented all of my work!! :hug:
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:iconastronomia:
It's hard to find the time but ur work is great, it deserves to be commented.. :D
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