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Footprints on the heart,
Tears in the soul.
Burning scars etched in:
You’re too broken to be whole.

Echoing fragility,
In the dark walls of the mind.
You wear a constant mask,
So we don’t see what’s behind.

You say you want someone to love you,
And you need someone to hold.
What you want, you never will get:
As the creased heart won’t unfold.

Bitter pills of affection,
At the heart they tore.
You know too well, what it's like
You've been hurt before.
©2005-2009 ~Icyblues
:iconicyblues:

Author's Comments

I think everybody feels like this.

Inspired by all the yesterdays, and all the masks I know.
Even through words,
It's hard to let true colours show.
But I've tried.

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:iconemwyalyce:
ohh my god, thats great!! And yes im sure many people have felt this way before... i know i have. I love how you used all your words.. its very effective. Great job :)

:heart: Emily xoxo :)

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[ It's all make believe, isn't it? ]
:iconicyblues:
Thank you so much...it means a lot. This is the first thing I've written for nearly a month... :(

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.x Let the teardrops as they fall, tell their story x.
:iconemwyalyce:
Oh poor you .. im glad this was the piece you wrote.. its beautiful :)

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[ It's all make believe, isn't it? ]
:iconicyblues:
:( thnak you v. much :hug:

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.x Let the teardrops as they fall, tell their story x.
:iconcrimsonlipstick22:
Very very nice :) I enjoyed it

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The shortest horror story in the world:

The last man on earth sat in a room.
There came a knock on the door.
:iconmidnight-aurora:
beautiful and wonderfully written
i really liked reading this
x x x

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--Black enchanting eyes cut through my heart--
:iconshadowoflifexdeath:
good rhymin and well written

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"Mess with the best, die like the rest" -Hackers
:iconeneleh:
Beautiful :) I especially liked the last verse! :clap:

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If the brain was uncomplicated enough for us to understand it, we'd be so dumb we wouldn't get it anyway.

GO Alemnesh!!

Member of ~sunsets ~Nature-Club =NaturPics-club

-HHH-
:iconthundergirl128:
im loving it :+fav:

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"My dream is hear rocks hitting my window and see you standing in the rain"
:heart: :hug: :heart:
:iconicyblues:
Thank you xxx

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.x Let the teardrops as they fall, tell their story x.

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