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But you said you loved me. by ~Icyblues:iconIcyblues:





When I think of that time,
Not so long ago down the line,
You told me you loved me.

I should have seen that 'truth' for the lie it was:
But I'd already got caught up in your web of lies and chaos.
But he said he loved me.

He said he'd never meant to break my heart,
And it would be best for us to part.
Next, I saw him hanging around with that tart,
Realising it was a lie he told me at the start.

Sitting on an old park bench, wishing my life away,
Thinking of all the things I could say:
To make this nightmare go away,
And leave it to yesterday.

Life goes on,
After all this time,
I still remember in my mind:
That I had been so blind,
To believe you when you said you loved me.
©2004-2009 ~Icyblues
:iconicyblues:

Author's Comments

Something that came into my mind. When you break up with someone and all the reminder is: 'You said you loved me'.

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:iconwesley-v-hek:
Ok lesson 1:

Never trust what a guys tell's you at first, because a lot of them they will do and say anything to get into your pantie.



I think this is a very nice poem Icyblues, hope you will egt some more good comments on it :)

Keep it up
:iconscipio-the-elder:
Very true. Great poem Icy. Keep writing it out, it helps.
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:worship::o

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:iconicyblues:
Thnx!! :) I'll keep your lessons in mind lol :D

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x You can close your eyes to the things you don't want to see, but you can't close your heart to the things you don't want to feel. x

...x Shattered Glass, Shattered Dreams, Shattered Heart, Shattered Soul x...
:iconicyblues:
Thanku :hug:

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x You can close your eyes to the things you don't want to see, but you can't close your heart to the things you don't want to feel. x

...x Shattered Glass, Shattered Dreams, Shattered Heart, Shattered Soul x...
:iconicyblues:
lol :) thnx :hug:

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x You can close your eyes to the things you don't want to see, but you can't close your heart to the things you don't want to feel. x

...x Shattered Glass, Shattered Dreams, Shattered Heart, Shattered Soul x...
:iconcraigism:
I like this...very good.

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:iconicyblues:
thanku :hug: :)

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x You can close your eyes to the things you don't want to see, but you can't close your heart to the things you don't want to feel. x

...x Shattered Glass, Shattered Dreams, Shattered Heart, Shattered Soul x...
:iconhiding-the-truth:
your stufff always makes my fav's icy. great job. but for some reason theres a prat of me saying i should call that one person and apologize to her....but whatever ill do it later. great poem :+fav:

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It's come to a time and point in my life where I either go along with I believe will be the best financially secure route in life. Or follow my dream, despite how foolish it is.

I'll choose my dream. Would you?

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